8. 名词作形容词

科技写作中经常会用名词来作为形容词使用,如 room temperature, university researchers. 当用一个 名词来修饰另一个名词时, 意义一般都很 清楚 . 但当三个名词 放 在一起, 或两个名词前再加一个形容词时, 就要小心 . 有的情况 下 , 3 个或 3 个 以上的名词放在一起, 表达的意思很清楚, 也是一种很简洁的表达方式 . 如 : blood white cell number, prostate cancer patient, Beijing University medical school student. 但有时会有多种讲法 . Top university researchers 可以是 researchers of (only) top university 也可以是 (all) university researchers who are top. 多个名词排在一起, 即使表达明确, 也给拥挤的感觉 . 应避免使用多个名词的修饰方式 . 最好的办法是用介词或其它方式来把他 们分开 , 以便清楚表达它们的修饰关系 . 多个名词罗列的情况经常发生, 下面 多举一些 例子 .

H e wrote the quality control group reports.

宜改为: He wrote the reports of the quality control group.

The patient showed chronic liver disease symptoms.

宜改为: The patient showed symptoms of chronic liver disease.

The human brain oxygen level is quite high.

宜改为: The oxygen level in human brain is quite high.

Their specific inhibition producing effects on fat containing food intake were assessed.

宜改为: Their specific effects of inhibition on the intake of fat containing food were assessed.

The present investigation evaluated various specific drug sample combinations.

宜改为: The present investigation evaluated various combinations of specific drug samples

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